This is a wonderful piece, though the chunks of word undereath 'pen' seem to distract and weaken the formal beauty of the piece. I wonder if a more compelling phrase might have been used below. Or, conversely, not any phrase but simply a random gathering of letters or text. Regardless, as this is quibbling on my part, an elegant formally-arranged work.
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This is a wonderful piece, though the chunks of word undereath 'pen' seem to distract and weaken the formal beauty of the piece. I wonder if a more compelling phrase might have been used below. Or, conversely, not any phrase but simply a random gathering of letters or text. Regardless, as this is quibbling on my part, an elegant formally-arranged work.
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